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Do you write Harry Potter fic, or is there at least some older HP fic that you’d still like people to read and review? Would you like to have the members of a small community comment on the fic of your choice and discuss it with you? In return, would you be willing to read a (not too long) HP fic – also beyond your “sweet spot” – and comment on it?

In Snowflake Challenge, when discussing wishes, (in particular my wish number five, here), I found out that I was not the only one interested in some more fanwork-related interaction on DW. A few days ago a conversation here gave me suddenly an idea, which I developed a bit at once.

My preliminary suggestion is that we found a DW community called perhaps something like All Owls’ Fic Club – or All Owls’ Fanwork Club.

Because I’m hopelessly limited to the HP fandom, I can just hope that there are enough people around who still write (also) HP fic, or are at least interested in reading HP fic and still discussing their own older HP fic. Those who make other types of HP fanwork could join, too (unless they feel it’s not fair that reading a fic takes more effort than receiving their work in order to comment). On the other hand, the community wouldn’t need to attract many people.

For instance, if we are just five who want to become fully active members, each of us could post a fic (of no bigger word count than 3000 – or 1500, or 5000, according to what we agree – or another fanwork) once a month. Every week there would be one new work to write a review on and discuss in comments. (The reviews could be posted also on AO3 if that’s where the author prefers to have all feedback collected.) Non-members could be welcome to comment, but the author could also decide to lock the post for only the members to see. Perhaps someone would like to post also (parts of longer) WiP. Concrit could be allowed – naturally just together with some positive points – but authors could also mention what kind of feeback they wish to get.

Please tell me if you are – or if you know someone who is – interested in sharing fanwork in this way!

Date: 2020-02-23 01:42 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] author_by_night
I would be VERY interested. Do it!

WiP. Concrit could be allowed – naturally just together with some positive points – but authors could also mention what kind of feeback they wish to get.

I think that's a good idea, and maybe allow the option to repost if someone, after feedback, decides to retool. We could also have a beta reader roster; that might also help people's fics get read, because then the beta reader might say "hey, I edited this fic, go read it."

I also like the idea of people posting really old fics they KNOW need to be retooled, but aren't sure where to start.

But again, those are things the writers would need to empphasize/ask for. Maybe use tags, like Ao3 does?

Date: 2020-02-23 05:00 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] goddess47
There are a lot of folk who write HP fic of varying types... so you should be able to get at least a handful of folk to start with...

A problem may be that HP folk have really silo'd themselves. I'm primarily a Snarry person and that group is regularly active, thanks to folk like Torino. And there's a good Drarry group out there that overlaps with the Snarry fandom.

But, there's a group of HGSS folk who don't seem to overlap with the slash folk. The het folk and the slash folk seem to keep themselves fairly separate. Add the gen folk and the NextGen folk and the Fantastic Beast folk, and you have groups that don't talk to one another for the most part. There are overlaps, of course, but I'm suspecting not that many.

So if it's a small group and someone's working on a, say, Harry/Pansy story, I have no personal interest since I can't see that pairing. I wouldn't write it, but I could work with a not too long Ginny/Luna story. So I do read femme-slash and het, but I'm picky on the pairings. And I don't know if the Harry/Pansy person would work through my Harry/Severus story... so requiring feedback from folk may be awkward, if you see where I'm going with that.

Also, I think you'd have to decide if you want to discuss existing works or provide concrit for WIPs. I'm not sure doing both in the same comm is a good thing, but that may be me.

With the above caveats, I'm cautiously interested.

You may want to start a comm, and make a poll (or an interest post) to see what folk are interested in doing... you can use [community profile] fandomcalendar and we can approach a couple of folk to help solicit interest from a variety of folk.

Starting small is good... and it sounds like a good idea!

Date: 2020-02-24 12:37 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] author_by_night

I want to still believe that it’s possible to find a handful of people who are willing to read widely, about any HP characters and pairings – or at least about those written by the others who join.


I don't... know. I was in a fest and literally everyone stuck to their preferred pairings. And to be honest, sometimes it's also a matter of what you can believe as plausible. On the other hand, I think that if there were emphasis on trying to give other people's work a fair shot, even if it wouldn't necessarily be something you'd normally read, that could work.

I'm in a critique group IRL. There are stories I wouldn't necessarily pick up and read on my own, but I still have to read them and provide feedback. It's a little different because it's a matter of an actual obligation, not a hobby, but there is a balance to be had, is what I'm saying.

Also, gen is one way to solve this problem. (Of course, most of what I write is either gen or romance that almost... reads as gen, because of the focus on other characters.)

Date: 2020-02-23 09:10 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] writcraft
Hi! I'm really thrilled to see you're thinking about this and I definitely agree it's a great idea and something I would definitely be interested in subject to time and so on. I also agree with your post and other comments, that it doesn't need to be a big group exercise and just a handful of participants to trial it would be absolutely fine.

One suggestion I did think might be interesting is if the piece is 'workshopped' before posting to AO3. I think there's something about the public nature of con-crit on AO3 that can be daunting/intimidating, and might also suggest to random readers they too could critique the piece (which the author might feel less comfy with). It could be structured where initial fic posts and the feedback are locked to community members so the feedback takes place in a 'safe' space? You could of course make more public open access posts too, to generate interest in the community, but it would mean a lot of the critique would be more private. If part of the initiative is designed to generate reviews on AO3 too, you could always combine it with a commitment to comment of members' finished pieces when they get them up on AO3 with things people particularly enjoyed about the final product.

I do agree with the comment above there might be some issue in terms of who is happy to read what pairings, but I think there might be a way of dealing with that when you see who signs up! A 'header' style sign-up would also allow authors to note what levels of crit they are happy with, i.e. 'I love con crit, don't hold anything back!!! I need help with structure, story, EVERYTHING' to 'I'm feeling a bit fragile about this fic, and it's really X I'm struggling to fix as opposed to extensive crit on style' and so on.

This is such a super idea and I really do hope I'll be able to participate <3



Edited Date: 2020-02-23 09:13 pm (UTC)

Date: 2020-02-28 12:33 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] writcraft
I see now I think the idea is more review based than con-crit / workshopping and I'm sorry if I inadvertently distracted from your intentions with my thoughts, I was coming at the idea from a slightly different angle I think which I suspect may have confused things a little.

Having read through the comments below too I definitely agree with the suggestion that finding people who are looking for the same thing is an important first step and then once you have that, I'm sure the way the community runs could grow organically from there. I look forward to seeing how things unfold with it and I think it's great to think of different ways to engage with other fics.

Date: 2020-02-24 12:05 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] walgesang
I don't know how much I'd be able to participate but it piques my interest! I think Writ brings up some good points about it being locked to community members. Out of curiousity, are you thinking of fics that the author considers completed or this is a first-draft thing that they want feedback on? How do you invision the community participating in a way that is more of a discussion and less so a beta/writer interaction?

Date: 2020-02-25 02:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] pauraque
Some of what you're saying sounds similar to [livejournal.com profile] xf_book_club, which was a comm for discussing finished and posted fics in X-Files fandom (often old classics). I wasn't active in it but it did seem to really function like a book club, with people bringing other writers' fics to read together, rather than writers themselves offering their own work for discussion. The writers weren't present in the discussions. But it sounds like you're imagining something more like a writer's workshop where authors ask directly for feedback and critique. But the fics would already be finished? Or would it be like a group beta during the writing process?

Date: 2020-02-26 04:20 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] pauraque
Well, that's very kind of you! I have read the other comments and I think many good points have been made.

I think for me, offering my writing for group feedback is not something I'd be likely to do. Sure, I like feedback (who doesn't?) but for deep discussions and working out how to improve a story, I'm more comfortable with a one-on-one beta or brainstorming process.

I actually write a lot of concrit of fics I read, and save it in a private document. For many years this has been a part of my own learning process, analyzing what I think works and what doesn't in other people's writing. But of course, that's very different from speaking in public or directly to the author. And I don't even mean just phrasing things diplomatically, but also that what I see as a problem that I would avoid in my own writing may not be a problem for the author -- or for their intended audience.

Fanfic varies a lot in its intentions and conventions. Sometimes the community that writes a pairing likes it to be a certain way that I don't see as realistic or in character. But I'm not the intended audience, so my opinion on it may not be helpful to the author. Like, I don't enjoy horror movies, and if I watch one I may wish it were less scary -- but that would be useless feedback to the creators, because horror movies are supposed to be scary and horror fans like that.

I'm not trying to discourage you. I hope you can find a way to make it work! I think it would depend heavily on finding the right people to do it whose perspectives are compatible, though.

Date: 2020-02-25 09:14 pm (UTC)
delphi: An illustrated crow kicks a little ball of snow with a contemplative expression. (Default)
From: [personal profile] delphi
I think it's a really interesting idea!

Just some personal notes on where I'm coming from with regard to potentially participating: I feel like my own expectations on commenting were shaped by always having written a lot of rare pairings and rare fandoms. While I definitely get fewer comments and opportunities for discussion on AO3 than I did in the heyday of HP fandom on mailing lists and journalling sites, I don't think it's the massive shift that people who wrote big pairings have seen. As a result, while I'm still interested in writing HP fic and would absolutely love the chance to have more discussions, the prospect of more feedback wouldn't necessarily be the sole deciding factor in getting me to prioritize finishing one HP story per month over the stories in other fandoms I might be working on.

Also, on the flip side of that, I'm aware that what I write might not be everyone's cup of tea. My favourite HP ships to write include characters that some people don't like reading about in romantic or sexual situations, the occasional kink that some people aren't comfortable reading at all, and some content (like underage sex) that might not be legal for some people to access depending on their jurisdictions. I wouldn't want to be the person whose posting turn everyone dreads; I consider my fic very much opt-in only.

However, while the characters and ships I really love tend to be niche, I beta-read widely and would love the opportunity to give my feedback muscles a workout. If there was some sort of membership option just for reading and commenting, I'd definitely be in.

Date: 2020-02-26 04:50 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] pauraque
I feel like my own expectations on commenting were shaped by always having written a lot of rare pairings

Me too. Getting limited amounts of feedback feels normal to me, and I think that makes getting more feedback feel like a much less urgent goal.

Date: 2020-02-26 06:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] delphi
It's a motivation question I've definitely found myself mulling over before. On about three or four occasions over the last twenty-plus years, I accidentally stumbled into writing something with a bigger audience, and while there were a lot of nice things about getting more feedback (except for once when it was Way Too Much and I could not handle the experience of being even the tiniest bit popular on Tumblr), those pluses weren't enough to make me want to write more of it. As long as I don't have reason to believe that a lack of response is down to me really embarrassingly bungling a story, knowing it made just one person happy is usually enough to flick that "success!" switch for me - I guess because I know that even in some universe where I was an amazing writer and everyone always left a comment on every fic they enjoyed, the pool of people interested in reading my pet pairings is limited. :D

Date: 2020-02-27 04:08 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] pauraque
Well, the universe where you're an amazing writer is this universe. :) But I get what you're saying, when you write niche stuff there's a low ceiling for feedback.

I've had the same experience with the fics I've written that got an unusually big reaction, whether because I wrote a popular pairing for once or lightning struck for some other reason. It's overwhelming to me and sucks all the fun out of it. It changes the nature of the reader-writer dynamic when you put a lot more readers into the mix, because readers can be much harsher in criticizing fics that are perceived as "successful". It's like they think, hey, you've already got so many kudos and comments, you're a big shot, you can take a little rough treatment! (Spoiler: I cannot.)

Date: 2020-02-26 07:45 pm (UTC)
delphi: An illustrated crow kicks a little ball of snow with a contemplative expression. (Default)
From: [personal profile] delphi
Not to snipe the response here, but if the viewpoint from someone who's been on AO3 since it opened is helpful: hits and comments have a long tail there. While most of my stories have eventually racked up more than 200 hits and five kudos, most have done so over the course of several years, bit by bit, rather than in the first month or two of posting. Out of the ten works I posted in the last year, five have fewer than 200 hits and three have no comments. I recognize that this is very different than what folks who regularly write large pairings are used to, but like I mentioned above, I think expectations get set differently when you write a lot of rare ships and fandoms.

Date: 2020-02-26 10:03 pm (UTC)
delphi: An illustrated crow kicks a little ball of snow with a contemplative expression. (Default)
From: [personal profile] delphi
I think it's perfectly understandable to be disappointed, and I really admire you for taking a solutions-focused run at the problem. :)

Date: 2020-02-27 06:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] pauraque
If you limited the count of kudos and comments to just what I've received during the last couple of months (since you've been using AO3) it would look like what you're describing. I doubt there's a substantial difference in the rate of feedback we're getting, it's just that I have been on AO3 much, much longer and there's been time for kudos and comments to pile up, as [personal profile] delphi said. Eventually even obscure fics without popular pairings or kinks collect some response, but you have to wait for the right people to find them in the course of their AO3 browsing, and that takes patience. A dripping faucet can fill a bucket given enough time.

Date: 2020-02-26 07:33 pm (UTC)
delphi: An illustrated crow kicks a little ball of snow with a contemplative expression. (Default)
From: [personal profile] delphi
It’s interesting to hear how different things people wish from other members of fandom [...]

It really is! Harry Potter is such a (wonderfully) weird fandom. It was so huge in its heyday that someone could fill all their fandom time in one little corner of it and never even suspect that other trends, norms, and platforms even existed. Now, on top of the broader changes in social media and in how people access the web that has affected all of fandom, Harry Potter is in a odd space of having slowed down significantly but still putting out more new content than many current fandoms - and being filled with a mix of people who have already told twenty years' worth of stories here, people born into a world where more HP fic than they could ever read in a lifetime already existed, and everything in between. It's hard to find common ground about what we want the fandom to look like, let alone build it.

Date: 2020-02-26 09:53 pm (UTC)
delphi: An illustrated crow kicks a little ball of snow with a contemplative expression. (Default)
From: [personal profile] delphi
I think it definitely is possible, especially if you find a group of people who are looking for the same type of community you are and are willing to commit to it. Numbers are on your side here. I was just looking at the Remus/Sirius tag on AO3, and depending on whether you limit it to "otp:true" or not, there were between 129 and 422 new stories or chapters so far this month alone!

On the one hand, I 100% see how that results in a lot of stories like yours getting lost in the shuffle. Unlike in the old days when works were commonly split up across many more smaller archives and communities, putting it all on AO3 makes it such a high volume that even a devoted fan could check the tag every day and find more fic than they have time to read - which can result in them only clicking on the first few stories they happen to find that day, or the stories whose tags or summaries really stand out, or the ones from authors the readers know personally. And if people are only checking the tag once a week or month, or searching based on freeform tags, lots of stories just won't get eyes on them.

But on the other hand, I bet this means there are other fans of many other medium and large Harry Potter pairings besides Remus/Sirius who are experiencing the exact same thing, and who might like stepping back from that high-volume environment and reading in a space that somehow rewards spending more time with fewer stories. Those spaces can be harder to wrangle and keep the momentum up in long-term, but I think a group of like-minded people could make it work if it was giving them what they really wanted out of fandom.

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